The first thing I realized when I did a word search for 'look' is that I use it too damned often. There were 303 occurrences in my 87,366 word manuscript. Is that a lot? Cause it seems like a lot.
The second thing I realized was how hard it was to choose one section out of 303 occurrences. Gah, I could have spent all day choosing one bit.
Naturally I chose one involving excrement:
When Shawn was a little kid he was a veritable dog poo magnet. Everywhere he went he picked some up in the soles of his sneakers. They’d be going somewhere in the car and the heater would start working and that’s when the aroma of canine du jour would waft up to the front seat, sending his parents into a gagging, whining chorus of, “Awww, Jesus Christ on a stick, Shawn, not again!”
He’d be like, “What? What’d I do?” Butch would stop the car in a flurry of curses and he’d pile out and open the passenger door and examine his son’s feet and, sure enough, there’d be a dog turd smeared on the sole of his shoe.
“We don’t even have a Christly dog!” Butch would say as he helped Shawn clean up.
“That’s because he’s a Dog Poo Magnet,” Weezie would add. “Shawn is magnetically altered to pull in dog poo from all points of the globe. He is the north pole of dog poo. If you don’t believe me, look up Dog Poo Magnet in the dictionary and you’ll see a picture of our Shawnie.”
Of course, posting my own lookie-loo isn't enough; now I must tag five others. All of these bloggers, by the way, are writers I met at this summer's Muskoka Novel Marathon, and I chose them in honour of our marathon wrap-up event being held this Saturday in Huntsville. I had the BEST time at the marathon this year and can hardly wait to rub elbows with these guys and hear what they've been up to.
Kevin Craig is a multi-published author and one of the kings of the novel marathon. It's amazing how fast and how well this guy writes. Also? He has literary tattoos, one for each of his books that have been published. So, as well as being king of the marathon, he's the king of cool. Srsly.
Lizann Flatt is one of Canada's best known children's authors and I had the absolute pleasure of sitting next to her at the marathon. A few years ago one of her books was selected to be involved in a very prestigious program which gives a children's book to every Grade One student in Canada. Lizann's book was chosen! How amazing is that? (Plus she's really sweet. Really sweet. Did I mention sweet?)
M-E Girard is hell on wheels. She is outrageous, outspoken and funny as the day is long. Lately her hilarious blog is ranty and raucous, just like she is. And I mean that in the nicest of all possible ways.
Sharon Ledwith gave me bling! She had bracelets and bookmarks from her new book, The Last Timekeepers, and she was handing them out to everybody at the marathon. I have worn the bracelet many times since and, whenever I do, I am reminded of how very, very nice Sharon is.
Lori Twining? What's not to love about Lori Twining? She's a veritable cheerleader of life and her enthusiasm was full on and adorable at the marathon. Her blog is self-deprecating and charming, just like she is, and even after pulling an all-nighter at the marathon, she was still cheery and wonderful to be around.
I can't wait to read your novel!! Get that beauty published already! ;)xoReplyDelete
Thank you Lisa!!!!Delete
Introductions to writers new to me. Thank you.ReplyDelete
And also for the peek, er, lookie-loo, at your manuscript. I like your dialogue. Want to read more.
Thank you so much, Stephanie. Your last four words warmed my heart like you wouldn't believe. Thanks.Delete
That's um... gross.ReplyDelete
All I can say.
You could say, "Geez, Cath, you are the most talented writer I know. Somehow you even manage to polish a dog turd." That's me. Helpful to one and all. Helping folks find words since 1960.Delete
Very entertaining snippet. Can't wait to read the whole thing!ReplyDelete
Hugs JoJo! Thanks!Delete
A nice excerpt Cathy, has given me a smile to start my morning with! ^__^ReplyDelete
Thanks Helen, and thanks again for the tag!Delete
What a great excerpt, Cathy! I'd love to see how that fits into your novel. As for the tagging me part, well, should I hug you or slug you? LOL! I'll get an entry up and let you know.ReplyDelete
I'll take a hug!Delete
What a personal tagging! I'd have been flattered to be grabbed in that style. And a fine share, Cathy.ReplyDelete
Love it. And it seems to me that there is one child like that in every family. There was in ours anyway. Which meant that one of the other siblings threw up. Pooh and puke. Joy and bliss.ReplyDelete
I wil chase up these other people you have tagged in your usual generous style. Thank you.
Yes!!!! Omg, it's a wonder we reproduce at all....Delete
Wait - you think I'm nice? Hmmm - this is gonna be interesting. Bahahaha. Love your excerpt - dog poo! Original! It's gonna be hard to step on, er top that one! I'm with Lizann - do I hug you or slug you? I guess you'll have to wait and see, my pretty...ReplyDelete
Yes, I totally think you're nice. By the way, thanks for the workshop on Saturday. I am so proud of you for persevering so long and finally getting your work published. You. Rock.Delete
Hey, those paragraphs are familiar. :) And wow, some new bloggers to check out. Lots of goodness packed into one post.ReplyDelete
Thank you Laurita!!!!Delete
I am currently editing out all those 'looks'... amazing how many of them try to creep in there. Little buggers.ReplyDelete
And excrement is the perfect place to jump in, yes! Awesome, possum! You rock. :D I think I was the poo magnet as a kid. I've passed it onto Roz now and have been safe ever since.
I need more time to read all these cool author's blogs! Ack!
They are buggers, aren't they? I'm just afraid if I take out all the bad words there won't be any left!Delete
Hmmm, Lori Twining seems familiar to me. Though I've spent enough time in and around Huntsville...ReplyDelete
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